Haiku: Mask

mask, ecstatic eyes
carnivore craving, nude bliss
gate to other world

submitted to Poetry Potluck, thanks Jingle for hosting 🙂

Published by Dag Travner

born and grew up in Klagenfurt (Austria), was living for over 30 years in Vienna, now back to her hometown in the very south of Austria near the border to Italy and Slovenia; multilingual freelance writer of fiction (mystery, crime, horror), essays (arts, philosophy, linguistics, politics), articles (cultural journalism), translator (french philosophy), indie film-maker and podcaster. View all posts by Dag Travner

4 thoughts on “Haiku: Mask”

gomagoti says:

March 9, 2011 at 11:33 am

i don’t get it Dag. Nice imagery, but beyond that i havent understood what you’re trying to convey here.

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fiveloaf says:

March 9, 2011 at 3:18 pm

it takes alot of discipline to get on to your plane and i think you did well with so few words.. try my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/

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Olivia says:

March 11, 2011 at 6:49 pm

Intense imagery!
very well said in just a few words- well done 🙂

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promising poets parking lot says:

March 25, 2011 at 3:54 pm

tight.
well done.
A++

keep it up.

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